Bitten Love

by kourtney
(baytown)

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It was a rainy night. I was walking by myself waiting for my mom. Through the trail and the trees I heard a footstep. Then, somebody bit me in the neck, Then I collapsed on the ground.

When I woke up I felt hungry. Why am I still here? I should get home fast. I began to run and in one second I was there.

Where have you been it's 11:00? It is past bedtime. You don't listen Cella. Ever since your dad moved to California you have been a bitch. Like you've never been one I said.

She gasps then slaps me. All of a sudden I kick her. I hate you!

I left out of the house. "Hard life huh?" a boy said. Yeah I said. You? I bit you. What? Why, because you need blood? No, because you need love, he said.

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Dec 04, 2014
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OKAY! NEW
by: Anonymous

yeah, it was nice...but not more than that happened with me...a real thing. you can read my stories too.

Mar 08, 2013
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awsome
by: vamp.

i hope u comeback and write more it great just need some action little but no one should judge u ur amazeing author

Mar 04, 2013
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Classe
by: Toni Marriott

just write more and it would be awsome

May 16, 2012
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bitten love
by: Anonymous

its great!!! i love the beginning but please write more about ths story. i wanna read more about the relation ship and ill tell all my friends to read it if u do. PLEASE!!!

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