Rings

by Kim
(Phoenix Arizona USA)

This is my entry for the totally cool and awesome WIN Bella's ring contest. I hope you like it.

'Rings'

A ring from Edward Cullen would not belong to me
his heart is with another, so I will just have to let that be
a ring from Brad's another story, for Angelina should move it on
so I would love a ring from Mr Pitt, just to try it on

A ring from Mr Clooney might be a nice fit
a ring from Mr Big, I sure could handle it
a ring from Johnny Depp if it came with the island would be nice
and two rings from the Bacon Brothers would be bejeweled not once but twice....and who doesnt love bacon, I mean diamonds

So a ring from a man like Edward Cullen given on a warm moonlit night
along with the protection and not a hurtful bite
would be a nice ring to own and wear upon my hand
if it came with the castle, the cars and the Cullen land

Bella can keep her man and while her heart does sing
I would enjoy the win, a really cool looking Ring!

Rings - Written by Kim

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Jul 19, 2010
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rings
by: eyesonlyfordave

This is very well written!! I would love a ring by Brad Pitt, lol

Jul 14, 2010
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Not Won By Vote
by: Constance

Guys! While I appreciate your enthusiasm, and supprt of this entry, this contest is NOT won by fan vote.

Vampire Empire will choose the winner based on certain criteria.

This entry has just as much of a chance to win as any other however, your comments will not determine the winner.

Thanks again for sharing your support!

Constance
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Jul 14, 2010
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Cute
by: Jes*In*CO

Very entertaining poem, wish you the BEST. GL Jes*In*COols

Jul 14, 2010
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Great Poem!
by: Ashlee

Awesome! Good Luck!

Jul 14, 2010
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Rings rock!
by: sottovoce

Definitely a 5 star effort! Good luck!

Jul 13, 2010
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unique
by: Laura

I think this poem is very imaginative!

Jul 13, 2010
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LUV it!
by: Ashlee

Great imaginitive poem! 5 stars from me!

Jul 12, 2010
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nice
by: sottovoce

I am just compelled to come back daily to give yourfine poem 5 stars! :-)

Jul 11, 2010
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Love it!
by: sottovoce

Good job. :-)

Jul 10, 2010
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Rings
by: sottovoce

Nice work on this lovely poem....good luck!

Jul 09, 2010
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Almost forgot....
by: sottovoce

....to get my daily vampire fix! :-)

Jul 08, 2010
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Good job!
by: sottovoce

Terrific...I am coming back everyday to support your literary expertise! :-)

Jul 06, 2010
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Awesome!
by: Anonymous

Very good!!!

Jul 06, 2010
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Loved it!!
by: rlpowers84

Very nice!!!!

Jul 06, 2010
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Love it!
by: Anonymous

Great job!

Jul 05, 2010
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Wow
by: Kutty1101

Great piece!

Jul 05, 2010
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Wow
by: Anonymous

Wow!!!

Jul 04, 2010
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thumbs up!
by: Bean_Cat

This is cute.

Jul 04, 2010
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Great!
by: tmmydrlng

I really like it!

Jul 03, 2010
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great poem
by: Anonymous

cute video

Jul 03, 2010
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babycat1216's vote
by: babycat1216

love this !

Jul 03, 2010
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thumbs up
by: sottovoce

Very well written. Good luck! :-)

Jul 03, 2010
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Good Luck
by: kmk1180

I like it...Hope you get that ring you want.

Jul 03, 2010
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daughter
by: Joyce

My daughter cracks me up. I have not read the twighlight books, I am a senior and cant see well...but her poems make me laugh!!

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