Vampire Girlfriend - Vampire Poem

by dnewell94
(Lafayette, ID, U.S.A.)

Vampire girlfriend
Beautiful, sweet
Bite, talk, listing
Loving demon
Bloody angel



Hey D,

Thanks for the way cool vampire poem submission. I really love the image you posted with your poem. It's beautiful. Her eyes are gorgeous and she has such a look of loneliness on her face. I can't quite see what she is holding... she just looks so sad. Her wings are wicked cool.

Also, your vampire poem says, 'bit, talk, listing.' Did you want that to say 'listening?' I can correct it if that is the case. I didn't just want to go ahead and make any changes to your work.

Thanks for your vampire poem submission.

Constance

Vampire Empire Editor